This person should be sacked!

[RadX]

First class response....

[Babyt]

i dont find anything wrong.

 

its just saying that by drinking their drink, u can see the result on ur skin itself.

 

so its 'visible goodness (in the drink) which u can see (on your skin itself)'

[Mustank]

actually now then i understand

[RadX]

actually now then i understand

 

 

pwah..not bad...i thought you would maybe 6 months down the road

[Mustank]

actually i did not get it until Darryn explained

[Mustank]

what to do....

[RadX]

what to do....

 

 

REst assured.....a good no of the population liddat too

[Mustank]

hey i think you just came up with an excellent slogan for some products:

 

wetness so wet you get wet

 

woohoo!!!!

[RadX]

hey i think you just came up with an excellent slogan for some products:

 

wetness so wet you get wet

 

woohoo!!!!

 

 

er...KY jelly??

[Watwheels]

i dont find anything wrong.

 

its just saying that by drinking their drink, u can see the result on ur skin itself.

 

so its 'visible goodness (in the drink) which u can see (on your skin itself)'

I kinda agree with you. Visible goodnes(as in the drink). You can see(probably as a result aka the model's figure).

Anyway they did not phrase it as a sentence. They put the "You Can See" on the next line.

 

The ad did came with the picture. Can say GPGT.

 

It's not like saying "I didn't do nothing". Thats' a double negative.

Edited June 30, 2010 by Watwheels

[RadX]

er...KY jelly??

 

 

...OR Durex...SO SAFE, it PROTECTS

[Darryn]

i dont find anything wrong.

 

its just saying that by drinking their drink, u can see the result on ur skin itself.

 

so its 'visible goodness (in the drink) which u can see (on your skin itself)'

 

Well that is one way to interpret the interpretation...

 

But if that's the case wouldn't it be better (and more evocative) "Visible goodness your friends will see"?

 

Or even, "visible goodness, your skin will thank you for"

 

The predominent image in the ad is the glass, so it is obvious (to me anyway) the it is the visible goodness in the glass that we are supposed to be seeing....

 

And the tag is not even clever.

 

I am betting that the agency came up with a really nice pun on visible goodness, but the client, thinking they knew more rewrote. What's more, I would be willing to bet that if they say this thread, they would blame the agency for not advising them properly or for coming up with a bad slogan....

[Beehive3783]

Not much wrongly wrong really, it was just written and penned by a stupid nincompoop probably while he was chaired on a seat to to work at work and earn money dollars so that he could buy food because his ravenous family was hungry

I mean...reallly...

 

Visible ...you can see?

 

What next? Visible goodness that you can't see?

 

Or Visible goodness that bites you?

 

What else would you expect to do to visible goodness but see it? perchaps their next ad...drink will have micropores of goodness, and the headline will be "tasty goodness you can taste"

 

Or I know......wetness so wet you get wet

Oh I see...

[Krado]

Or I know......wetness so wet you get wet

 

[RadX]

For a Gay, you quite cleber hor

 

[Mustank]

yeah yeah

 

Darryn, you better go copyright the wetness so wet you get wet slogan....dman i think this is a really catchy one

[Mustank]

looks like we two like that one:

[Darryn]

er...KY jelly??

 

Hee...

 

Free service now for KY...

 

"Lure her with the slippery lubrication that will make her wet"

Or

"wet n slippery goodness that will make her wet"

Or

"If you're hardly hard, lure her with slippery wetness that will make her wet"